Copy Edit the World #2

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Lack of consistency, in “We repair computer”, computer should be plural, since they are referring to multiple computers, as seen above the writing. “We repair computers” is the correct edit. Seen outside of a tailor in Downtown SJ.

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The dollar signs should be in front of the numbers. Seen in the Creasian menu.

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“Tortillia” should be spelled “Tortilla”. Seen in the Creasian menu.

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“Heinekan” should be spelled “Heineken”. Seen in the Creasian menu

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